The Best is Yet to Come!
November 29, 2005 | It's All About Writing
Last night the critique meeting went great. Beth and Yasmine showed me how to clean up the rough spots in this on-going saga. So once again I’m back on track. I must admit, I was pleased when they reacted to a line just as I’d hoped. It’s a thrill when your reader gets those little nuances tucked in a scene.
This morning I ‘m ready for bear, hmm, bare. Yes, definitely bare because David and Teddi are now hot on the path to gratifying sex. Yes, the road will be bumpy. It has to be – it’s a romance. But there’s a hellova lot of fun along the way.
Time to get back to writing. Teddi’s in the middle of a fantasy where David is licking and sucking. The poor woman can’t be left out there with her nipples puckered and her vagina throbbing for too long.
Sloane
Get back to writing is right, girl. Don’t leave anyone in that kind of suspense!
On November 29th, 2005 at 3:47 pmOh she’s fine now, laying back and enjoying a cigarette. Now poor David is in the throes of guilt and doesn’t know how to react. Guess a writer work is never done.
On November 29th, 2005 at 5:02 pmDear God, I’m in WAY over my head! Since you can write about this kind of stuff – and make it riveting to the readers – I’m gonna have to get one of your books and read through it to figure out just HOW BAD my own writing is. But then, I’m finding I’m writing more like Garrison Keillor than Sloane Taylor, so reading a romance can’t hurt. Maybe I’ll get some pointers on how to enliven my otherwise rambling stories.
Thanks for the cliffhanger – but in my experience, leaving a lady dangling while you go off for a cigarette is a certain death. Certain.
Forrest
On November 30th, 2005 at 3:01 pmForrest, you ALWAYS crack me up. And I too would love to see this sucker in print if I ever get off my dead rear and finishing the editing.
Teddi’s doing fine now. In fact she’s in the mood to make David pay for making her wait so long. The little sex kitten is planning a superb evening that’ll rock him for a long time.
By the way, you’ve got some serious publishing credits I can only hope to aspire too.
Happy writing!
On December 1st, 2005 at 11:47 amSloane