Comments on: Lettuce anyone?

By: Sloane

Sloane — Thu, 02 Feb 2006 14:17:01 +0000

Amen, Sister. It’s my favorite tool, for writing that is.

By: Yasmine

Yasmine — Thu, 02 Feb 2006 02:39:31 +0000

The delete button is an absolute wonder for writers.

By: Sloane

Sloane — Wed, 01 Feb 2006 16:34:39 +0000

I love you all and your fantastic wit. Thanks, guys, for keeping me on my toes.

By: Jenna Howard

Jenna Howard — Wed, 01 Feb 2006 15:41:02 +0000

I suppose I’m more of a musemissive than a submissive. Will ponder this for a future blog. You know how I never have nothing to blog about.

By: Sherrill Quinn

Sherrill Quinn — Tue, 31 Jan 2006 23:34:03 +0000

Well, if I just take out all the “that’s” I’m in pretty good shape.
And the trap of passive writing is extremely easy to fall into. (See there? How easy that was?)

By: For The Trees

For The Trees — Tue, 31 Jan 2006 22:56:43 +0000

Oh, Lordy, Lordy, Lordy!!! I just got through cutting out all the words on that short list of adverbs and adjectives, and my 86,000 word novel is now a 20,000 word short story!

ZOWIE! You DO know how to knock the wind out of a guy’s sails!

Thanks for the edit!

By: Sloane

Sloane — Tue, 31 Jan 2006 22:54:09 +0000

SHIT!!!!!!!! From now on I’m sending you the blogs to proof read, Sweet Jenn, because this effing machine doesn’t seem to have the capability!!!

Poor Melissa is so old that her bra needs a bra.And you oughta get a load of David. ICK!!

You’re not the only one susceptible. There’s a study for us to work on- are submissive writers prone to passive writing?

Whadda think, sex kitten, are you up for it? Make a good blog for you.

By: Jenna Howard

Jenna Howard — Tue, 31 Jan 2006 18:17:21 +0000

So…is a reundancy different then a redundancy? And maybe Melissa has really good muscle control in her bosoms and she can flex them. Did anyone ask her? lol.

Passive words suck. Suck I say! I’m very susceptible to those. It’s the submissive in me.